Post by Raventalon on Jul 14, 2013 13:02:22 GMT -8
RAVENTALON
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Name: Raventalon
Age: Twenty-two moons
Breed: American Shorthair
Clan: ShadeClan
Rank: Warrior
Age: Twenty-two moons
Breed: American Shorthair
Clan: ShadeClan
Rank: Warrior
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Eye color: Hazel
Pelt Color: Black
Markings && Scars: Three white toes on his left foreleg.
General build: Small and skinny, easily hurt and broken. Very swift.
Pelt Color: Black
Markings && Scars: Three white toes on his left foreleg.
General build: Small and skinny, easily hurt and broken. Very swift.
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Likes: Kits, squirrels, trees, storms, water, running, swimming
Dislikes: Dogs, intruders, rogues, pain, the territory, unable to move
Strengths: Running, water, trees, storms, swimming
Weaknesses: Running, being clumsy, pain, unable to move, kits
General Personality: An adventurous tom, Ravenpaw enjoys kits and being outdoors. He won't leave the camp unless it is an extreme emergency. Ever since he was traumatized from being injured at only just seven moons, Ravenpaw lost his entire memory and now he has to start over.
Dislikes: Dogs, intruders, rogues, pain, the territory, unable to move
Strengths: Running, water, trees, storms, swimming
Weaknesses: Running, being clumsy, pain, unable to move, kits
General Personality: An adventurous tom, Ravenpaw enjoys kits and being outdoors. He won't leave the camp unless it is an extreme emergency. Ever since he was traumatized from being injured at only just seven moons, Ravenpaw lost his entire memory and now he has to start over.
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Mother: Kestrelflight -- he doesn't remember her
Father: Stonewhisker -- he doesn't remember him
Siblings: Fawnleap -- no remembrance
Larksong -- no remembrance
History: As a little kit, he was a happy bundle of joy and he really liked playing with others. There was no real harm here. As an apprentice though, he was traumatized by a raid to his former Clan that left the clan missing. Now, ShadeClan is once more brought back and he still remembers that day. The tom lost all memory of his life before the raid. He had to be restored when he fully recovered. He's still traumatized to this day and hasn't spoken since.
.Father: Stonewhisker -- he doesn't remember him
Siblings: Fawnleap -- no remembrance
Larksong -- no remembrance
History: As a little kit, he was a happy bundle of joy and he really liked playing with others. There was no real harm here. As an apprentice though, he was traumatized by a raid to his former Clan that left the clan missing. Now, ShadeClan is once more brought back and he still remembers that day. The tom lost all memory of his life before the raid. He had to be restored when he fully recovered. He's still traumatized to this day and hasn't spoken since.
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OOC Name: Owl
Other Characters: Sunkit (possible the name might change)
RP Example: Ravenpaw licked his hind legs, looking thoughtful as he tongued strands of black fur into place. His ocher eyes glittered uncertainly as he glanced outside, then he turned his head back to resume grooming. The half-grown tom looked uncertain as he padded outside of the apprentices' den, an ominous feeling in his gut. Something.. was wrong.. The bushes trembled in front of the camp and the ShadeClan apprentice's eyes widened in horror as a sickly smell reached his nose.
He was only so small! " Intruders! Intruders! " Ravenpaw's wail carried around the camp, startling the bushes into sending out several larger looking cats. They even looked mean. Ravenpaw squeaked in terror as three toms much much bigger than him cornered the little tom. " Wh - wh - what do you want from us?! " he attempted to snarl, but it came out stammering and weak.
The adults smirked down at him, their gazes practically stripping the tom of his fur. " We want your kits and your herbs, and you're coming with us, kitty. " the largest sneered at him. " Torture the runt. Juk! Jak! Surround the medicine den. Kar! Lera! Icicle! Get the kits. The rest of you, find someone to torture. " the largest one screeched across the camp. Instantly, the named cats scuttled to their stations.
" P - please don't hurt me.. " Ravenpaw whimpered fearfully, ocher eyes glinting in terror. The cats sneered down at him, laughing at the apprentice. The gray one knocked Ravenpaw off his feet and Ravenpaw landed on the ground heavily. The other tom pounced on him before Ravenpaw could get up. Instantly, he could feel pain wracking his body as the two started to tear off fur and skin.
" P - please stop! " he whimpered pathetically. The two toms snarled at him to shut up. Ravenpaw let out a screech of agony as both toms gripped his front right leg and began stomp heavily on it. The bones splintered and Ravenpaw let out another shriek of agony. " Ahh.. Ahh.. Ah.. " that was the only sound coming from him as the brown tabby sat on his back and the gray tom tore a scar down his side. Soon after, waves of agony rolled through his tortured body as the two toms started to beat him with their paws and claws.
" Hal! Tom! " the leader called to them. " Stop! It's over. We can leave now. " Hal and Tom didn't stop, and their menacing gaze never left the tortured Ravenpaw. Eventually, the dark ginger leader pushed himself between the agonized apprentice and the bloodthirsty toms. " I said that's enough. I only wanted you to break his leg! " he snarled. " Let's go. "
Ravenpaw could barely make out the words of the leader from the agonizing pain burning through his body. The last thing he saw was the group of cats leaving with three kits and their entire herb stock.
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The black apprentice slowly opened his eyes, a slight pain shooting through his right foreleg. The memory of the torture made him wince slightly. Where... am.. I..? he thought groggily, the den around him not at all familiar. His forehead knit together in confusion and he moved his head, causing an ugly pain to shoot through it.
" Hello..? " Ravenpaw called weakly, voice hoarse from his torture and pain filled screeches during the raid. A cream colored head poked around the corner of an opening in the wall, with green eyes that were concerned. " Ravenpaw! You're alive, thank goodness. "
" Wh .. who? " Ravenpaw croaked out, unsure of who the cat was talking about.
" That's your name! " the she-cat exclaimed, expression disbelieving.
" What? " Ravenpaw whispered.
" Oh dear StarClan. " the she-cat rolled her eyes and hit her head against the wall. " Let me get Sparrowstar. "
A few moments later, a huge dark gray tom with one white paw entered the den with a relieved expression. " Ravenpaw! Thank goodness! We thought you dead! Well, not since you were out for like.. a half moon straight. " the leader babbled breathlessly, pale eyes huge as moons.
" WHAAT? " Ravenpaw croaked and coughed violently.
Sparrowstar blinked, concerned. " Ravenpaw, don't you remember ShadeClan? Your leader? Your medicine cat? " he asked gently.
The medicine cat's, Palefur's, green eyes were guarded as Sparrowstar gently asked the question directly.
" ...What do you mean? I don't remember anything before the raid if that's what you mean. " Ravenpaw was confused as he croaked this out.
[ The other characters in this example are NPCs. Don't antagonize me if you see a cat resembling any of anyone's characters. It was never my intention. Also, I omitted the real leader and real medicine cat from this example for any powerplaying and GMing reasons. ]
Other Characters: Sunkit (possible the name might change)
RP Example: Ravenpaw licked his hind legs, looking thoughtful as he tongued strands of black fur into place. His ocher eyes glittered uncertainly as he glanced outside, then he turned his head back to resume grooming. The half-grown tom looked uncertain as he padded outside of the apprentices' den, an ominous feeling in his gut. Something.. was wrong.. The bushes trembled in front of the camp and the ShadeClan apprentice's eyes widened in horror as a sickly smell reached his nose.
He was only so small! " Intruders! Intruders! " Ravenpaw's wail carried around the camp, startling the bushes into sending out several larger looking cats. They even looked mean. Ravenpaw squeaked in terror as three toms much much bigger than him cornered the little tom. " Wh - wh - what do you want from us?! " he attempted to snarl, but it came out stammering and weak.
The adults smirked down at him, their gazes practically stripping the tom of his fur. " We want your kits and your herbs, and you're coming with us, kitty. " the largest sneered at him. " Torture the runt. Juk! Jak! Surround the medicine den. Kar! Lera! Icicle! Get the kits. The rest of you, find someone to torture. " the largest one screeched across the camp. Instantly, the named cats scuttled to their stations.
" P - please don't hurt me.. " Ravenpaw whimpered fearfully, ocher eyes glinting in terror. The cats sneered down at him, laughing at the apprentice. The gray one knocked Ravenpaw off his feet and Ravenpaw landed on the ground heavily. The other tom pounced on him before Ravenpaw could get up. Instantly, he could feel pain wracking his body as the two started to tear off fur and skin.
" P - please stop! " he whimpered pathetically. The two toms snarled at him to shut up. Ravenpaw let out a screech of agony as both toms gripped his front right leg and began stomp heavily on it. The bones splintered and Ravenpaw let out another shriek of agony. " Ahh.. Ahh.. Ah.. " that was the only sound coming from him as the brown tabby sat on his back and the gray tom tore a scar down his side. Soon after, waves of agony rolled through his tortured body as the two toms started to beat him with their paws and claws.
" Hal! Tom! " the leader called to them. " Stop! It's over. We can leave now. " Hal and Tom didn't stop, and their menacing gaze never left the tortured Ravenpaw. Eventually, the dark ginger leader pushed himself between the agonized apprentice and the bloodthirsty toms. " I said that's enough. I only wanted you to break his leg! " he snarled. " Let's go. "
Ravenpaw could barely make out the words of the leader from the agonizing pain burning through his body. The last thing he saw was the group of cats leaving with three kits and their entire herb stock.
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The black apprentice slowly opened his eyes, a slight pain shooting through his right foreleg. The memory of the torture made him wince slightly. Where... am.. I..? he thought groggily, the den around him not at all familiar. His forehead knit together in confusion and he moved his head, causing an ugly pain to shoot through it.
" Hello..? " Ravenpaw called weakly, voice hoarse from his torture and pain filled screeches during the raid. A cream colored head poked around the corner of an opening in the wall, with green eyes that were concerned. " Ravenpaw! You're alive, thank goodness. "
" Wh .. who? " Ravenpaw croaked out, unsure of who the cat was talking about.
" That's your name! " the she-cat exclaimed, expression disbelieving.
" What? " Ravenpaw whispered.
" Oh dear StarClan. " the she-cat rolled her eyes and hit her head against the wall. " Let me get Sparrowstar. "
A few moments later, a huge dark gray tom with one white paw entered the den with a relieved expression. " Ravenpaw! Thank goodness! We thought you dead! Well, not since you were out for like.. a half moon straight. " the leader babbled breathlessly, pale eyes huge as moons.
" WHAAT? " Ravenpaw croaked and coughed violently.
Sparrowstar blinked, concerned. " Ravenpaw, don't you remember ShadeClan? Your leader? Your medicine cat? " he asked gently.
The medicine cat's, Palefur's, green eyes were guarded as Sparrowstar gently asked the question directly.
" ...What do you mean? I don't remember anything before the raid if that's what you mean. " Ravenpaw was confused as he croaked this out.
[ The other characters in this example are NPCs. Don't antagonize me if you see a cat resembling any of anyone's characters. It was never my intention. Also, I omitted the real leader and real medicine cat from this example for any powerplaying and GMing reasons. ]
Let the riot begin! LOL - 
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